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I see, one would like the property but not willing or would rather not have it posed! lol And btw, bottoms up! lol sam

posted by sam444 on January 27, 2010 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Penny
The Penny's of this world do not always get a look in. One looks beyond the other mystic lady, the worldly temptations are obvious. As they say cash is King, and very true as Arthur found out last year when the Market crashed. It would be nice to have a chauffeur, but I like a story if this is what it is to end happily.     

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2010 at 12:09 AM | link to this | reply

meaning
And in yours Bill

posted by C_C_T on January 26, 2010 at 11:56 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE
: In any event there’s a lot of meaning in your lines as Elyse notes. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on January 26, 2010 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

Your imagination is so vividly creative ~ 
This beginning is funny, "blow up doll" ?  LOL ~ and then the suggestion of light therapy to tone it down...What a start to a great write again, Corncrake.  so much inspiring imagery --- loads in your writing
even the wolf hound type dogs (I've always wanted a Wolf or Deer hound).  That's a new term to me, "you don't usually go picking apples when there is apple pie in the oven" ~ very new to me. and loved the last line, "how many times has a lark got to fly, until it can float and sing in the sky?"  perfect. Can't wait 'til the
next chapter...I still think Penny is the one ~ but, we'll see ... Elyse

posted by elysianfields on January 26, 2010 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Song...Arthur don't blame me if you go through with this farce and find
Don't blame me one of my relation shipped himself and came back with four horses before returning. He married or did something and left his supposed fortune to some one. It took a while to get a letter that far, when we were a twinkle. As for Arthur I'm washing my hands of him, his behavior is bordering on lunacy, but he is superstitious and I am a bit intrigued by Dorothy, she might decide to abort the mission. Introduce Wiley to a slow worm for a start.  

posted by C_C_T on January 26, 2010 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply

Song...Arthur don't blame me if you go through with this farce and find

yourself singing a different tune very quickly. I for-tell no warm cuddly moments here with Dorothy. I see gloom doom torture, a body on the rack. Broken dreams and heart(dear sweet Penny) and gardens and goats gone to rack and ruin. Cant. break your word....what balderdash is that........the whole community is at stake and you have to ruin it for everyone by falling on your sword.

Who was this female you visited looking for a wee puppy? I thought you sent all your weirdos off to Australia generations ago.I remember all those 10pound Poms the old dart sent off to us. Some made damn fine Aussies....others kept our pubs in business for years.

 My python was a real snake.......I called her Boo. Wiley doesn't fancy a pet snake.

posted by Kabu on January 26, 2010 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply