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Re: great dialogue great pace very readable and I keep wanting more.
Thanks, Kabu.  Things will heat up soon.

posted by LuciW86 on January 24, 2010 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Darson, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.  I don't think the girls will disappoint you as things unfold.

posted by LuciW86 on January 24, 2010 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Luci
Thank you.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story as the ladies let you peek into their lives.

posted by LuciW86 on January 24, 2010 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Captivating episode !
Thanks!  Things will heat up in a minute.

posted by LuciW86 on January 24, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Great!
Benny's guilt will eat away at him but he might be okay.

posted by LuciW86 on January 24, 2010 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Great!
I'm following and learning. I wondering what will become of Benny.

posted by Hackthorne19 on January 24, 2010 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

Captivating episode !

posted by afzal50 on January 24, 2010 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Luci
I like your story-telling, all backed with real-life experience.

posted by anib on January 23, 2010 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

I knew within the first sentence that I REALLY like your style of writing. It's easy on the eyes, comprehensive, and enjoyable. Thank you! Very refreshing!

posted by Darson on January 23, 2010 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

great dialogue great pace very readable and I keep wanting more.

posted by Kabu on January 23, 2010 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply