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This is awesome! I feel like I am in the story, just outside all of it and taking it in! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 13, 2010 at 3:02 AM
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It's so cool the way a reader can float through your story and as Elyse commented - the dialogue is unique, amusing, and carries the reader along. It's like we're standing there. Good stuff!
posted by
adnohr
on January 12, 2010 at 7:51 AM
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Re: elyse
Thankyou for interest, I know it needs editing, but it is being written hand to mouth and I really appreciated your comments
posted by
C_C_T
on January 12, 2010 at 3:19 AM
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I love the dialogue --- like "hob" (just love that word...) many of your words are so fun to read and speak off my 'Texan' tongue. I tell you this story is so good and well written. I'm truly interested to see what tomorrow does bring. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 11, 2010 at 7:36 PM
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