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Re: magic potions now?
Hi, You've got her pegged, but she might surprise you later on. Real life is more shocking than the fiction most of the time. Have a great day.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 10, 2010 at 10:11 PM
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magic potions now?
I'm thinking nothing good can come of this. And hasn't your heroine ever heard the old saying, "if he'll do it with you, he'll do it to you?" I'm not liking this protagonist much, since she doesn't just want to borrow a husband/father from his family, she wants to steal him. Enough preaching for one day... I guess this means your story still reads like real life.
posted by
Pat_B
on January 10, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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