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Strong, well fleshed out characters!
Porridge as punishment - I think so!..:) Well done!  

posted by LizaM on December 24, 2009 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Peas porridge hot, peas porridge cold...
I always wondered what peas porridge was... Nothing to do with your story, which is about to get exciting! 

posted by Pat_B on December 18, 2009 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply

Good detailed descriptions, Ian! Hm, porridge is not my favorite food either! 

posted by elinjo on December 18, 2009 at 12:52 AM | link to this | reply