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I thought the last line was superb! It sent me in all directions! So happy you want to sit at my table with me, too! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 15, 2009 at 4:29 AM
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Love the analogy - the metaphors - the visual ~ and the whole poem...meter, rhyme - Perfect poem -
~ reads well - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 14, 2009 at 6:44 PM
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