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I liked this line too... "
its simply absurd, lyrically unheard, because you da missing note, you see?"
I think you've hit on something here..smile..
posted by
mneme
on December 15, 2009 at 5:55 PM
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Ooops… copy/paste error. Sorry, Poet. I meant to leave a comment about the excerpt Calia referredto… it is brilliant.
posted by
Troosha
on December 14, 2009 at 8:01 AM
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Absulutelyloved the dialog…. “DVD’s worth ofpossible ailments” actually made me laugh out loud. I don’t think yourcomment required translation…I hear ya.
posted by
Troosha
on December 14, 2009 at 7:27 AM
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oh wow!
posted by
Star5_
on December 13, 2009 at 7:10 PM
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these simple ass verbs cant spell love like you and me
its simply absurd, lyrically unheard, because you da missing note, you see?
Awesome!!
posted by
calia14
on December 13, 2009 at 4:34 PM
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"You're the missing note"...there's a great metaphor to capture
the reader's attention..
- two thumbs up..:)..
posted by
Rumor
on December 13, 2009 at 4:15 PM
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