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An interesting new style of poetry....like a gushing spring.

posted by Straightforward on November 24, 2009 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

I am with Sam - it has a very vivid imagery. Great poem.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2009 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic! It is imagery laden but I loved the setup, purging verve by ghouls, then the middle, the conflict of a sort and an introduction to the protagonist, and then the resolution! I think this is a book, or a movie! WONDERFUL!!!! sam

posted by sam444 on November 19, 2009 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply