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congratulations!
posted by
Nita09
on November 20, 2009 at 2:40 AM
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Well, congratulations! I loved it! I thought the setup was rather impressive! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 17, 2009 at 7:26 AM
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Kabu
You really think it's very good? I know you do, always speaking through the heart. The prose that i write, I often have to do a lot of exercising, for correctness. But a poet is a man more of the heart. Many, many thanx
. Am a computer engineer working on mobile intelligence applications, and writing poetry!!!
posted by
anib
on November 16, 2009 at 11:07 PM
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magic_moon
iMine was just a filler, your's I know would be awesome.
posted by
anib
on November 16, 2009 at 11:02 PM
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Sinime, poets like you approving means a lot to me
You know my credentials
, so I thank you mucho : -) xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on November 16, 2009 at 11:01 PM
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calia14
Stream of consciousness, Wow! Think Virginia woolf's To a Lighthouse first used the phrase, and I am glad you and Elyse are there to count, so are others, when it comes to writing poetry I am not really good at, but you say "Very good" ,so thank you so much from the bottom of my heart.
posted by
anib
on November 16, 2009 at 10:58 PM
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shamasehar
Your thumbs up and the flower, are fragrantly motivating. I generaly shy away from wrting my own poetry. Thank you so much.
posted by
anib
on November 16, 2009 at 10:52 PM
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posted by
shamasehar
on November 16, 2009 at 10:17 PM
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I like elysianfields comment, this poem does read like a stream of consiousness. Very good.
posted by
calia14
on November 16, 2009 at 9:49 PM
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elysianfields
Your encouragements will make me a poet, but the prospect is a little daunting for me. However, I will attempt
~ Aba. And yes, do keep correcting me wherever necessary.
posted by
anib
on November 16, 2009 at 9:44 PM
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Aba, I must say ~
great poem my dear one ... this was stream of consciousness and succinct!!!~ I think you should yes, write more --- straight from your heart
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 16, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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Its very good but so unlike you :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 16, 2009 at 4:43 PM
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...'tis possible that i may have said a similar thing a time or three...but, 'twas a long time ago it 'twas...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on November 16, 2009 at 4:11 PM
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It is very good and I believe it is exactly what the addict says
posted by
Kabu
on November 16, 2009 at 11:45 AM
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