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Its Cold Outside

Beautiful images! Well done.

posted by SFJoseph on November 8, 2009 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

"but baby it's cold outside" --- I'm humming that song after reading this...Just beautiful --- melodic and warmth to my  ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on November 7, 2009 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

I know what you mean.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 7, 2009 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

posted by skye08 on November 7, 2009 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

yep you said it all here and it sure is cold outside.

posted by Kabu on November 7, 2009 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

You've got it all down exactly right.  Except, we have an unusually warm spell here right now--mid seventies and brilliant sunshine.  Even the night didn't get cold last night.  But, cold is coming.  I feel it in my bones.

posted by TAPS. on November 7, 2009 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

Glad to be inside where dreams flourish! Shivers in the cold brrr

posted by merkie on November 7, 2009 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

 Originally romantic and meteorological love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on November 7, 2009 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome imagery! And I think it will continue to puzzle man indefinitely! It is cold! sammie

posted by sam444 on November 7, 2009 at 3:51 AM | link to this | reply

It may be cold outside, but your beautiful words warm the heart. I just love it that the ocean is never amiss in your poems. Hope we can meet after I come back from the cruise.

posted by vogue on November 7, 2009 at 1:37 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent imagery Sinome

and a beautifully written piece of work my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on November 7, 2009 at 12:09 AM | link to this | reply

Chilling

posted by calia14 on November 6, 2009 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

sooooooooo booooootiful

posted by 9STAR on November 6, 2009 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

The use of the adjective "shamelessly caressing" for Northly winds, the clear skies, the stark trees, dead leaves, and you walking through, creates a background that can only be called awesome, my fine poetess friend xoxoxo - :)

posted by abanerjee on November 6, 2009 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply