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Poisnant and stirring write Marta . This surely touches an aching heart.

posted by merkie on November 6, 2009 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

You have presented a mix of romance and sadness at the same time. I love your warm feeling in this poem. It is assured that your love is true     chuck.

posted by chuck_ibrahim on November 2, 2009 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

I feel sad while reading this.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 2, 2009 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

"I love you, don't ever forget." If he remembers that kiss or If he reads your writing, he'll never forget luv.Wiley & Kabu

posted by WileyJohn on November 2, 2009 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I could not help but be deeply moved by this..... 

posted by Troosha on November 2, 2009 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

how sad its so hard to say goodbye and know its the end

posted by lustorlove on November 1, 2009 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

This is sooooo Beautiful

When Richard saw the Light, he called to me and said: "I see the Light, come quick so I can tell you bye."  We kissed and I told him goodbye and I loved him and he did the same.  He then turned blue and went semi-comatose for 3 days until I told him that his work here was done and he had taught Joe how to be the "Daddy" of our family and Joe would take care of me. He immediately released his soul.   I was so blessed to have the opportunity to say goodbye to Richard and have him say goodbye to me.  It is a memory I shall cherish forever.  

posted by skye08 on November 1, 2009 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Very touching. Goodbyes must be playing an important part in your life...

posted by Nautikos on November 1, 2009 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

This brought tears to my eyes...surrendering, relinquishing --- simply being strong and for Love  xoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on November 1, 2009 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on November 1, 2009 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply