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having evolved into a sailor, why would you need a tail?

posted by OTA. on November 16, 2009 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

hmmm....seaborne --- would it be a clam or an anemone?    Elyse

posted by elysianfields on November 1, 2009 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

 Now this is an effective little thing. I like the element of surprise in it. It leaves you with an image of the aquatic narrator. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 31, 2009 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply

You said genesis, aka the beginning! Then I thought of mythology! Now I am going to settle in on the mussel because you have been on vacation and I know what they did to small inland lake I raised my kids on! They are guileless!  Shelly

posted by sam444 on October 31, 2009 at 4:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Makes sense to me.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 31, 2009 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

So that's what Haiku is all about, not understanding it eh? Oh, Seagulls? LOL

posted by WileyJohn on October 30, 2009 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

Oh of course I thought of everything else. Silly me.

posted by Kabu on October 30, 2009 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds like penguins to me.  They are so cute.

posted by TAPS. on October 30, 2009 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

I can't think what it is.

posted by Kabu on October 30, 2009 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply