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 Thank you for sharing. In any event you make a good analogy between thunder and brainstorming I think. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 30, 2009 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Perhaps thunder and rain at another point in life, reminds you of a sad time and it just gets poeticized right out of the psyche luv. We love ya

posted by WileyJohn on October 30, 2009 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

I was taken by the thunder as well! What a conclusion! Love you! sammie

posted by sam444 on October 30, 2009 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Rolling thunder.  I can't even explain what the sound does to me.  It isn't just the sound, but the whole atmosphere that goes with it--the color of the sky, the heaviness of the air, the silence of everything else, the suggested force of the advancing storm.

posted by TAPS. on October 29, 2009 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

We had such storms back in the summer this poem makes me wish for one.

posted by Kabu on October 29, 2009 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

 ~ I love the Thunder and tonight it has been so...Your pen is gilded, gifted Sinome and this, yet another gift to share ~ I tell you, you're a Star that lingers, a Moonbeam that lights every shadow - yes, poignant by the end, but the passion you bring carries me away towards the Light ~  ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 29, 2009 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

posted by _teddypoet_ on October 29, 2009 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, how I can relate. Beautifully expressed...

posted by RomaKay on October 29, 2009 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Oh this is a beautifully sad poem. Your pen brings out those sad lines to be washed out of your knowning by the soft and beautiful rain. Let them go with the rain!

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