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It can be frustrating but you use the dawn to bring a gift! Excellent!

posted by merkie on October 31, 2009 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Elyse

Thank you, dear friend

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Samantha39

well what better time is there to sleep?  It's not like you are using that time anyway....

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: beauty in every word, it's a treat for your readers!

Thank you, dear friend

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: shobana

thank you

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you so much, you are a balm for my confidence xxxxox

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

I am not surprised that you picked up on that!  How could I not end the poem on a high note?

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: SSNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOZZZZZZZZEEEEEEE

ROFL!

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: i HAVE TO FIGHT THE NEED FOR AN AFTERNOON NAP

some days, me too :P

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Rockingrector_retd

It can be frustrating, can't it?

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

Thanks Troosha - I am very glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: shamasehar

Thank you

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Snowview

Thank you!

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2009 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Such beauty as the day is born
That yawns are lost in my enraptured sighs

Sigh ~ Beautiful Lion ~ just stunning...perfect - concise and write on!!! ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 28, 2009 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

i wanted to sleep at work today!!!!

posted by Samantha39 on October 28, 2009 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

beauty in every word, it's a treat for your readers!

posted by 9STAR on October 28, 2009 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely Lionreign - sleepless it is and awakened to a new morn.

posted by shobana on October 28, 2009 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my Gawd Neil ... when I think I have read the best of you , you manage to come out with a poem like this one!  I was trying to pick a favorite line but I just couldn't choose, I love them all!!!!  Each and every one is a fine example of your incomparable talent, filled with truth and wisdom and something not many poets posess, the ability to touch the reader, to connect with others by expressing feelings and things we all have felt. Excellent work.  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on October 28, 2009 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

How deligthful that the yawn got lost in the sigh! I think this is very descriptive of a restless night! sam

posted by sam444 on October 28, 2009 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

SSNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOZZZZZZZZEEEEEEE

tOO LATE. lol

posted by Kabu on October 28, 2009 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

i HAVE TO FIGHT THE NEED FOR AN AFTERNOON NAP

SO THAT I CAN SLEEP AT NIGHT.

posted by Kabu on October 28, 2009 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

So true - I really hate it when I can't sleep!

posted by Rockingrector_retd on October 28, 2009 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

Pretty darn good for a guy who didn't get any sleep...

posted by Troosha on October 28, 2009 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully captured!

posted by shamasehar on October 28, 2009 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

Very well expressed! Thanks very much for your visit. Nita.

posted by snowview on October 28, 2009 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply