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Forward, forward is the way to go!

posted by hardilaziz on October 29, 2009 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

So evocative and passionate a write Shelly ~ and this one line: Dreams can be sharp reminders that delicate reconstruction will return the
splendor of the past to gleam once again.

speaks splendidly to my heart ~ Bravo and Kudos, my dear Poetess ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 29, 2009 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

enchanting and deep

posted by Samantha39 on October 28, 2009 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

You need a light to lighten your way

posted by lustorlove on October 28, 2009 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

sam
This is just too wonderful a poem to be receiving a justifiable comment worthy of it. Poesy of the highest order "Flowing steady from a spring of reassurance the cool water will create a
verdant oasis within the schism."  I'll carry this imagery throughout the day .

posted by abanerjee on October 28, 2009 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely enriching to the soul My Sam and you seem to be in deep thoughts these days. Have a pleasant evening sweetie and a fun time reading and I love you to bits.

posted by shobana on October 28, 2009 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

Wow sam, you're bringing me to new poetry,s frontier here in blogit! I never thought that poetry could be so deep without being overly "sappy". I love it! And even like the way you present it!

posted by auslander on October 28, 2009 at 3:52 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly
I simply feel humble after having read this. It is profound. It is magnificant poetry beyond anything I could attempt writing; it was even difficult to understand in many places, but it is so powerful. God bless you.

posted by Justi on October 28, 2009 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply

clapping while standing for this indeed is poetry.

posted by Kabu on October 28, 2009 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Profound and thought provoking! Thanks for your comment Shelly; so glad you're feeling better!

posted by snowview on October 28, 2009 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Wow this is deep
and so cleverly written, I stand to applaud this awesome poem

posted by lionreign on October 28, 2009 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Comment on Darkness Unveiled
Sam, hi.  Deeply-mined(forgive the play on words) thoughts.  We all sleep until awakened . . . how true.joab

posted by joab3 on October 28, 2009 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with Troosha!!  Amazing and thought-provoking!

posted by calia14 on October 28, 2009 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

I’ve always thought that far too many people are "marooned in incessant slumber". Your poem today has quite the Wow factor, Sam – an extremely soulful write.  

posted by Troosha on October 28, 2009 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

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