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posted by
hardilaziz
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October 29, 2009
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So evocative and passionate a write Shelly ~ and this one line:
Dreams can be sharp reminders that delicate reconstruction will return the
splendor of the past to gleam once again.
speaks splendidly to my heart ~ Bravo and Kudos, my dear Poetess ~ Elyse



posted by
elysianfields
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October 29, 2009
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enchanting and deep
posted by
Samantha39
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October 28, 2009
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You need a light to lighten your way
posted by
lustorlove
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October 28, 2009
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sam
This is just too wonderful a poem to be receiving a justifiable comment worthy of it. Poesy of the highest order "
Flowing steady from a spring of reassurance the cool water will create a
verdant oasis within the schism." I'll carry this imagery throughout the day 

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posted by
abanerjee
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October 28, 2009
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Absolutely enriching to the soul My Sam and you seem to be in deep thoughts these days. Have a pleasant evening sweetie and a fun time reading and I love you to bits.

posted by
shobana
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October 28, 2009
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Wow sam, you're bringing me to new poetry,s frontier here in blogit! I never thought that poetry could be so deep without being overly "sappy". I love it! And even like the way you present it!
posted by
auslander
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October 28, 2009
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Shelly
I simply feel humble after having read this. It is profound. It is magnificant poetry beyond anything I could attempt writing; it was even difficult to understand in many places, but it is so powerful. God bless you.
posted by
Justi
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October 28, 2009
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clapping while standing for this indeed is poetry.
posted by
Kabu
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October 28, 2009
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Profound and thought provoking! Thanks for your comment Shelly; so glad you're feeling better!
posted by
snowview
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October 28, 2009
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Wow this is deep
and so cleverly written, I stand to applaud this awesome poem
posted by
lionreign
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October 28, 2009
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Comment on Darkness Unveiled
Sam, hi. Deeply-mined(forgive the play on words) thoughts. We all sleep until awakened . . . how true.

joab
posted by
joab3
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October 28, 2009
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I agree with Troosha!! Amazing and thought-provoking!
posted by
calia14
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October 28, 2009
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I’ve always thought that far too many people are "marooned in incessant slumber". Your poem today has quite the Wow factor, Sam – an extremely soulful write.
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Troosha
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October 28, 2009
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posted by
RomaKay
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October 28, 2009
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