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I am left thinking of the song to" catch a falling star and put it in your pocket , never let it fade away...."where do we go astray?
posted by
merkie
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October 27, 2009
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Very touching and poignant, expressed in a masterly style, as is your forte. "falling star", "fading away", "when I look back" and a number of others, carry different layers of meaning for me, and it is so reflective that I must sit down for another detailed reading. Kudos, Sam Aba.
posted by
abanerjee
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October 26, 2009
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when one burns out, the other one gets the energy....the total of energy
is same....
posted by
9STAR
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October 26, 2009
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Sam444
I read your poetry and find myself apprhensive about you luv. Are you alright my friend.?
posted by
WileyJohn
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October 26, 2009
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you are so talented girl!!!!!
posted by
Samantha39
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October 26, 2009
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very sad My Sam I am. Like fortelling a death.
posted by
Kabu
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October 26, 2009
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How tragic that sounds Sam..the falling star - just beautiful. Somehow I just don't want it to hit the ground! Lovely poem sweetie. Love you.
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shobana
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October 26, 2009
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so good. amazing!
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RomaKay
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October 26, 2009
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O-o-o-oh, I'm familiar with that feeling, but you have put it in writing. I think you could write poetry about just anything.
posted by
TAPS.
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October 26, 2009
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Heart breaking, but we always have to follow our desires, and our heart.
Chuck.
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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October 26, 2009
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The shooting stars can kill love...it is good when it dies in many cases......on to something real...
posted by
mariss9
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October 26, 2009
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Shelly, I find this waxing and waning --- almost as a struggle - a great write as always - like strobing across the screen here - flickering in the wake (did you get all your past works backed up?) ~Elyse sending you Love from the Texas Fields --- hoping you're doing well -
xoxoxo
posted by
elysianfields
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October 26, 2009
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Profound indeed!
posted by
hardilaziz
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October 26, 2009
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In The Wake Of A Falling Star
The mind is an observatory -- the user often sees through a glass darkly, however.
joab
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joab3
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October 26, 2009
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