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I think this might be my favorite of all that you've written, at least at this moment of having just read it.

posted by TAPS. on October 27, 2009 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

I admire your freedom in verse, so rhythmic and so passionate ~ this Troosha is just another beauty of yours --- full of imagery and then nostalgia --- just rich by design.  Love your writings ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 26, 2009 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha
Suggestive and pregnant with thoughts you have touched autumn, winter and the now distant spring with your pastel drawing .

posted by abanerjee on October 25, 2009 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Minimum baggage is the secret of peace and happiness!

posted by hardilaziz on October 25, 2009 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Truth inimitably expresed in your beautiful style....  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on October 25, 2009 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Some things will never fade from memory.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 25, 2009 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

What a gorgeous picture. And once again, the poem matches it perfectly.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on October 25, 2009 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

I love this! Each line is dreamy and filled with purpose and imagery!
Great stuff!

posted by Ariala on October 25, 2009 at 5:54 AM | link to this | reply

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