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you are in an adventurous mood

posted by lustorlove on October 24, 2009 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

 Leave time for writing poems love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

 

posted by BC-A on October 24, 2009 at 5:10 AM | link to this | reply

Shackled but trying to move on. What a portrayal of reality!

posted by hardilaziz on October 23, 2009 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

May enlightenment and excitement come your way!! That is my prayer.

posted by mariss9 on October 23, 2009 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

"I want to walk through dense forests,
dark as the universe and emerge in
the light of understanding! "     ..................Me too Shelly/Sam ideals and goals!

posted by merkie on October 23, 2009 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Truly, in your words.. "wanting and doing" are so far apart. An adventure seeker you are and a great poet with insight and depth.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 23, 2009 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Shelly ~ you want --- and you dream --- and how many of us do just the same.  I know I think sometimes what I want --- and I hope and hope one day (like going to Kenya) that it will happen.  I like this whole passionate piece.  Very well written, introspective and definitely full of imagery ... xoxo Love you ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 23, 2009 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

It is in this intense desire of restlesness, of the covetable ... divine dissatisfaction, that keeps the search alive and kicking - that which ultimately leads to ..... Excellent and very fluent and very attractive poem, dear sam ma'am .

posted by abanerjee on October 23, 2009 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

I agree that this is thought-provoking, and coveting is also a sensitive issue as well, but as usual, nice write 

posted by Aspire2Inspire on October 23, 2009 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

Quite apart from the fact that this is very though-provoking as so many of your poems - I admire your creative energy! How do you do it??? (I have read the previous ones too, of course, even if I didn't comment. Especially when the poem is an expression of faith - I do understand that, sort of, but not having any faith, I never know what to say)... 

posted by Nautikos on October 23, 2009 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

Comment on To Covet

Possibly, you will find what it is that you truly covet, once you begin the jurneyjoab

posted by joab3 on October 23, 2009 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

I don't know about the coveting (isn't that one of the thou shalt nots) but I know all about that wanting. 

posted by TAPS. on October 23, 2009 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

It's all about letting go and letting God.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 3:15 PM | link to this | reply