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Re: ROFL

lionreign oh stop it you are a terrific poet.I love your workso romantic and positive an everything.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

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sam444 oh you are #1 Queen of the poerty blogs.I'm just having some fun and trying to learn.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

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magic_moon thanks for popping in and the comments.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

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Troosha great little picture love.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I love the lines of that last bit of verse, the rhythm was perfect

Pat_B you are just a great encouragement to your friends.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

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lustorlove lol which I probably won't do.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Missy

Justi Youse is jus' a wicked ol' lady.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabuskiepie-;)

WileyJohn LOL CONFESS UP LOVER you don'tunderstand a word that you copied but thank you so much for being so helpful.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

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abanerjee LOL NOT REALLY JUST TRYING TO LEARN.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice of you to specially acknowledge the comments at Blogit

Straightforward i ENJOY REPLYING TO MY FRIENDS IF i HAVE ENOUGH TIME.NOT ALWAYS POSSIBLEOFCOURSE.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

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elysianfields LOL DARLING IREALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT I AM DOING WHEN IT COMES TO POETRY. I JUST WRITE. I DO TRY TO LEARN THOUGH.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

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hardilaziz thank you my friend, I really do love the blogit family.

posted by Kabu on October 23, 2009 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

ROFL

I loved the poems at the end - especially the first one.. I laughed aloud at that one.

 

I am awful at poetic forms, I have learned more about them from Sam444 than I ever did at school, but I just write what I feel, and watch in awe at those of you who can write well in forms.

posted by lionreign on October 23, 2009 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Practice makes perfect! lol I write in form poetry to become a better poet, but some of it is so difficult I think I do it to drive myself mad! lol I like that you are venturing into poetry, too! Thank you for your kind thought as I did sleep well again! Never stop praying for me, what a difference! Love you! Your sam I am

posted by sam444 on October 23, 2009 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

posted by magic_moon on October 23, 2009 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Troosha on October 23, 2009 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

And I'm clicking again because my pea brain couldn't remember

how many lines...  It's the last five lines. Perfect as they stand. You don't need the first few. Just think of the illustration!  A darling dumpling girl sitting flat and ticked off in a puddle, a drop of muddy water dripping from the curl in the middle of her forehead.

posted by Pat_B on October 23, 2009 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

I love the lines of that last bit of verse, the rhythm was perfect

for the words. It's the stuff of classic nursery rhymes. This MUST go in your story book!

posted by Pat_B on October 23, 2009 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

they can be a challenge if you really get into them

posted by lustorlove on October 22, 2009 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Missy

I don' know nothin' 'bout birthin' no babies!

posted by Justi on October 22, 2009 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuskiepie-;)

U R Welcome for the rose, but I'm not sure you have the real gist of Haiku. Now, as an expert Hakuist, I reeve you wif instruction, Banzai!!!

"Haiku, Japanese verse form, notable for its compression and suggestiveness. It consists of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.

Traditionally and ideally, a haiku presents a pair of contrasting images, one suggestive of time and place, the other a vivid but fleeting observation. Working together, they evoke mood and emotion. The poet does not comment on the connection but leaves the synthesis of the two images for the reader to perceive. A haiku by the poet Bashō, considered to have written the most perfect examples of the form, illustrates this duality:

Now the swinging bridge
Is quieted with creepers ...
Like our tendrilled life.

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posted by WileyJohn on October 22, 2009 at 8:52 PM | link to this | reply

kabu

The queen Kabu's Haikabus. Wow, nuther dimension!

posted by abanerjee on October 22, 2009 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Nice of you to specially acknowledge the comments at Blogit

and I guess it could do us a world of good to consider and work on the comments....Great going, Kabu.

posted by Straightforward on October 22, 2009 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

You are so right on Kabuski ~  (this is you at cool: )  By jove, me thinks you are the next beat poet in the making. and dahlin' I am so glad you write, 'cause I enjoy anything, everything your gilded pen smears ~  ~ Elysiekins

posted by elysianfields on October 22, 2009 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

I must admit that Spitfire's haiku was a terrific effort!

posted by hardilaziz on October 22, 2009 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

Your love and affection is limitless! This genuine outpouring is enough proof!

posted by hardilaziz on October 22, 2009 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply