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An unwritten invitation
very mysterious verse
posted by
2Philomena
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October 23, 2009
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A suspenseful beauty, your poem is visually an intoxicating mystery.
posted by
yellowrose55
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October 23, 2009
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Yes, its like dancing to a tune helplessly! Your portrayal is so true to the situation! Well done once again.
posted by
shamasehar
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October 23, 2009
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Lovely Shelly! Very satisfying for your readers!
posted by
snowview
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October 23, 2009
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I love this one
that last stanza in particular is absolutely brilliant.
I rarely do much to rework poems, because when I re-read them, I usually hate them and want to delete and start again 
posted by
lionreign
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October 23, 2009
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An Unwritten Invitation
The structure stands on its own, sam.
joab
posted by
joab3
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October 23, 2009
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Sam
I liked the ending and almost felt that it could have been the beginning (or both)....
I know what you mean about fiddling around with a poem trying to make it "just right" and eventually you just have to let it go.
posted by
Troosha
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October 23, 2009
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posted by
magic_moon
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October 23, 2009
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Delightful read!
posted by
hardilaziz
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October 22, 2009
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Such fine musings done in great style, inimitable.
posted by
abanerjee
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October 22, 2009
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I like it when you rework your poetry ~ 'cause we get to read it again
~ I love this writing --- the deep introspection and the imagery here is wowow!!! However, never let a piece drive you insane ---
--- it's been said, an artist has to learn to walk away after the signature is placed. (something I never learned to do ~
) You're so brilliant dear Shelly, xoxox Love ya' ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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October 22, 2009
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Unwritten invitations are kinda foggy, lol.....
posted by
_Decshak
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October 22, 2009
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well lets all go to insaneville together. I think it would be a good spot
why no one could blame us for anything. (sinister music plays) Great poem love.
posted by
Kabu
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October 22, 2009
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You are not insane my Sammie... far from it, you are the sanest person I know. I can see you had fun with this one :-) Love you to the ends of the universe... WWwwaaaaaayyyyy past the Milky Way loll... xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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October 22, 2009
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sam ~.~
I enjoyed this piece immensely. Strange -- how the mind, with its limitless abilities, can neither understand nor analyze itself. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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October 22, 2009
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