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You depict a very intricate image of being imprisoned in a difficult relationship.

posted by 2Philomena on October 23, 2009 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

Geat advice

beautifull presented... this is such a wise poem, love, that I am quite awed by it

posted by lionreign on October 23, 2009 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

Amen! Release the ties that bind and get out there and experience lif e with gusto! Everything you said at my blog about the Milky Way and such, all I can say is times 2~ Gotcha, for the moment! Are you recovering nicely, my darlin' Sinome! And of the other thing with the grocery cart, is that one okay? Love you Sweetie! sammie

posted by sam444 on October 23, 2009 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome, true awareness and beauty are woven passionately throughout your poem. I carried a knot like that once.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 22, 2009 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome ~.~

Wonderful write...great imagery! Sound, wise advice -- though more easily said than done. Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on October 22, 2009 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Those knots are tough to get rid of.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 22, 2009 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Sinome ~ what a pain this is --- that you describe.  Agony, long-suffering pain.  I have been there.  It can hold the heart captive.  The bleeding you speak of --- from the time it takes to work through it, 'til resolve - until liberty comes, is poignant.  This whole poem is so intense it 'bleeds' ~ I tip my pen to you with my  xoxox Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 22, 2009 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I know of those knots you speak of and isn’t it freeing when we finally untie them!  

posted by Troosha on October 22, 2009 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

The last two lines are very true, difficult as it might be to follow.

posted by snowview on October 22, 2009 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

 Ironically that’s life love. Eh BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 22, 2009 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

I guess you're making a pertinent suggestion, but it's one that's very

difficult to follow

posted by Straightforward on October 22, 2009 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply