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A lot can happen in a quiet place. So unique and very thought provoking.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 22, 2009 at 11:26 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my

 … there’s a lot here. Excellent, no? BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 22, 2009 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

You're right. Azur's blog is very evocative. Especially that one.

As for your poem: Haiku or not Haiku, that is the question.

posted by Pat_B on October 22, 2009 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with Shelly on this one Naut ~ western forms are more liberal ~ I think this is cool ~ and powerful thought --- as Shelly said, go on and have another titch of scotch  ---- GNight (me and my warm milk ) ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 21, 2009 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

I would classify this as a Western version of a Haiku! One does not have to observe the accent on using nature! I would say it is all Canadian! And by all means, Naut, have another scotch! lol Shelly Shall I join you? lol

posted by sam444 on October 21, 2009 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Personally I enjoyed this blog with a metaphysical subject. The way I looked it you've broken new ground.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 21, 2009 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

 it always amazes me how so few words give so much to think on.

posted by RomaKay on October 21, 2009 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

Haiku often uses nature, but I would suggest it is rarely about nature,

As with yours, it is often about human nature.

posted by Ciel on October 21, 2009 at 5:34 AM | link to this | reply

Honestly I'm not qualified to judge whether this is a bona fide haiku or not. However what appeals to me is the way you reflected on another blogger's blog and came up with this one. IMO this is one of the things that makes Blogit a pleasant place to hang out. 

posted by elinjo on October 21, 2009 at 1:56 AM | link to this | reply

It may not be haiku but it is your own expression and I love writing three-liners too- haiku or no haiku!

posted by hardilaziz on October 20, 2009 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

I guess I need a Scotch cos .............

posted by Kabu on October 20, 2009 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

I loved it Naut... and hey... being animals, we humans are very  much part of Nature, so your Haiku is technically quite correct :-) xoxo

posted by Sinome on October 20, 2009 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

Another good one...

hey Naut, lawyers can be imaginative too...hahaha, good night! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on October 20, 2009 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

You could remove just one little "o" and make it a perfect haiku with a word from nature.
(turn logos into logs - HAHAHAHA)

posted by TAPS. on October 20, 2009 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos - I think the haiku is good though...enjoy the scotch.

posted by shobana on October 20, 2009 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply