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wow..the title of the poem is so apt I think. very intriguing. Thanks so much for your visit to my blog and kind comment.

posted by shobana on October 25, 2009 at 4:32 AM | link to this | reply

THE BLACK WIDOW
She loves me; she loves me not; she loves me (ouch that hurt).joab

posted by joab3 on October 23, 2009 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

A dark touch
 The first line’s Dickensian, humanizing an inanimate object. The rest leaves the source of the melancholy to the reader. Awesome poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 22, 2009 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

wow
the imagery of this one is so rich - I loved this (I read it twice too... it seems this poem demands it)

posted by lionreign on October 22, 2009 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

interesting write!

posted by RomaKay on October 21, 2009 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant! I read it twice just to savor the imagery! KUDOS!!! sam

posted by sam444 on October 20, 2009 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply