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A very fne write indeed. I loved the way she, being wild of spirit and not quite at ease with her own kind, pictures herself as a four-legged one, continuing her empty gaze into the distant lands and the skies, letting readers guage as to what could be going on in her mind. Thus an equally apt ending

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abanerjee
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October 20, 2009
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People can seem like a herd too. In this way they can look friendly but you can feel like you’re in a stampede. And then you have to sit on the fence and sort your friends out. BC-A, Bill’s RJLST
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BC-A
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October 20, 2009
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took my breath away!!! classic....
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9STAR
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October 20, 2009
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Roma, I agree with Elys, your writing style is very good indeed and your use of descriptive writing techniques is absolutely wonderful - so captivating imagery and vivid indeed.
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Aspire2Inspire
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I like your writing ~ and in going back over some blogs, I really like your writings...thank you for visitng my blog as now I can find yours ~


~ Elyse --- there is so much description here in your writing, bringing much imagery to life and vividly so. Very good
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elysianfields
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October 20, 2009
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