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I just love how you can wrap a story into the lines of your poetry....Add with it, the emoting of a myriad of emotions....You are just awesome!

posted by Wigopa_ on October 20, 2009 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

I feel a sense of helplessness and sorrow when reading this.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 20, 2009 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

Not an experience that I ever had but after reading this I believe I know

what it would be like. You have written so perfectly the heartbreak.

posted by Kabu on October 20, 2009 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! If this isn't the perfect rendition of being with the wrong one when the right one comes along! I thought this to be very poignant! The imagery just grabs the reader and holds on long after the poem is read! Now that is fine imagery for me! sammie loves you the Milky Way times 4 other galaxies! OOOH, love that one! I am battling a bit of depression since my son is on this crazy mission but I want to know how you are feeling, Sweetie? sammie

posted by sam444 on October 20, 2009 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

nice work here

posted by spiderfly on October 20, 2009 at 1:13 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Sometimes  Most of the time you don't have to be the "first" to be the bearer of all those gifts..... 

posted by Troosha on October 20, 2009 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant and beautiful, as always!

posted by snowview on October 20, 2009 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

That sounds like me when I was young and thought that I was in love with someone already taken. 

posted by TAPS. on October 20, 2009 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on October 20, 2009 at 5:45 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and sad love poem.  It was much in the style of lustorlove's poems.  I actually re-checked to see that I was on your blog.  :)   

posted by calia14 on October 20, 2009 at 1:19 AM | link to this | reply

so meaningful!

posted by 9STAR on October 19, 2009 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply