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how sad of her to feel that way
posted by
lustorlove
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October 19, 2009
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Poor naive, precious Olive ~ awwww--- and the strength comes to this wee woman - reality rolls in and proves to empower her...so tell me, what did she do with this information? (please tell me you are going to write more ) You are such a love Kabu ~ You are soo gifted. Thank you for sharing this with us all ~
always ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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October 18, 2009
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Kabu
I
must add my voice to the chorus of protest: You can't stop here! It ain't FAIR!
posted by
Nautikos
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October 17, 2009
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Re: What a place to leave your readers --
Pat_B LOL WELL WE CAN'T UPSET DEAR PAT SO I WILL KEEP WRITING.
posted by
Kabu
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October 17, 2009
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Re:
sam444 some people just live sad lives.
posted by
Kabu
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October 17, 2009
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Re:
adnohr LOL No need to beg more coming.
posted by
Kabu
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October 17, 2009
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Re:
TAPS.hmnnn yes well I have been learning a thing or twofrom you dear friend.
posted by
Kabu
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October 17, 2009
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Re:
hardilazizwhat a lovely comment thank you my friend.
posted by
Kabu
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October 17, 2009
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Re: Kabu
WileyJohn lol I hear you and I will continue but perhaps with a twist or two.
posted by
Kabu
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October 17, 2009
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What a place to leave your readers --
It's like Butch and Sundance backed up to the cliff with the posse in hot pursuit. Will they jump and continue the adventure or will they give up? The end. I'm spitting dry, dusty disappointment out of my mouth and lifting my cup for a tiny sip of hope the story will continue.
posted by
Pat_B
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October 17, 2009
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If he had an ulterior motive then he sold himself short for letting you get away! People are strange! He may have been pressured, too! Only he knows for certain! So spill the beans if it isn't too personal for we are here for our darlin' Kabu! Your sam I am
posted by
sam444
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October 17, 2009
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Kabu, I'm beggin'!
posted by
adnohr
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October 16, 2009
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Always leave'um beggin' for more. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
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October 16, 2009
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I read Olive's story at one go. I must say it is rivetting stuff.
posted by
hardilaziz
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October 16, 2009
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Kabu
"Much more to my story but........?" You can't quit here for goodness sakes. Did he marry her just to get the bank loan? This is more of your terrific writing ability, you just have to keep it going love, don't quit it here pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease
posted by
WileyJohn
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October 16, 2009
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