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Hemingway...

   Oh, this was a great write! Especially since I am from Michigan. Use to ski at Boyne Mtn.  Anyhow, you done a great job keeping the reader interested - and though 'maybe'  cate-gorizes as 'rambling', but very interesting. You are good at taking a simple subject - and make it sound wonderful. I enjoyed it, and it made me homesick :O).         - INAHA -

 

posted by Inaha on October 16, 2009 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

I totally agree... it's best to put a loss to rest!

posted by hardilaziz on October 16, 2009 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

Maybe you can recall some thoughts from the poems and embellish on them,,,Lemon desserts are the best...Lemon bars, lemon pies and I have to have garlic sesoned  lemon on poultry and fish when I am in the mood. With years of lemons I have learned to absolutely love lemons in their different uses!  I hope you can retrieve some of your poems if possible.

posted by mariss9 on October 15, 2009 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent Shelly! Wouldn't I love to join you! I do hope you can retrieve your writings.

posted by snowview on October 15, 2009 at 2:57 AM | link to this | reply

I HAVE BEEN WORRIED FORYOU ALL DAY AND YES TOO SCARED TO
COME READ YOU AND FIND OUT HOW STUFF IS GOING. I JUST HOPE ALLTHAT WONDERFUL WORK HAS BEEN KEPT. YOU MUST GET A DISK TO KEEPYOUR WORK ON. BACK UP IS VITAL MY SAM IAM.

posted by Kabu on October 14, 2009 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Well said Sam And yes lemonade is appropriate . I hope you can retrieve your poetry!

posted by merkie on October 14, 2009 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

nice poem and it looks like a tree

posted by lustorlove on October 14, 2009 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

An absolutely wonderful poem My Sam..I run out of things to say sometimes as you say it to perfection. Just too bad about the computer sweetie. Hope you get that sorted out soon and I wish I could join you for the lemonade..but they have canceled all flights to US due to the weather..lol.

posted by shobana on October 14, 2009 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

Sam

Needless to say when I read “How do we comprehend loss” I took  a completely different turn in my thinking for in the loss of someone there is great healing in lingering in the memory from time to time. At the very least it fills the empty hole in our heart.  But I understand your piece was coming from a completely different perspective.  

posted by Troosha on October 14, 2009 at 3:42 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on October 14, 2009 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

You just reminded me that I've got to get out and go to the market.  I'm out of several things, one of them being lemons.  I cannot do without lemons.  I am helpless to fix a meal with the lemons are all gone.  By the way, I liked the way you wrote about loss.  I don't think there is a person alive who has not experienced loss to one degree or another.

posted by TAPS. on October 14, 2009 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Sam,"no one can rest in loss"..........then hope"there is a moon on the ridge....."& a journey on your own "map & compass left behind"..........amazing!

posted by shamasehar on October 14, 2009 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem sweetie.  I am sorry about your loss but I agree with you that most of the most recent poems should be on Blogit... ((((Sammie)))  Love you tons  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on October 14, 2009 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Very wise Sam...
The line "As I am in the universe, the universe is within me"
is deep, and therein lie all the solutions, best wishes, Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on October 14, 2009 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

so well done!!!!!!!
as always!

posted by 9STAR on October 14, 2009 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

I have my lemons and a few to spare I can bring LMAO! Awesome Poem

posted by kdstorm73 on October 14, 2009 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

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