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Sincere thanks to all my friends here! - hardilaziz

posted by hardilaziz on October 15, 2009 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

I find this a recurring theme in my own poems

as in in "Festival of Peace" in The Washington Poems:

Or mocking eyes of soulless beauty
which can not stop their play to love?

You have struck a common nerve, my friend.

Well done!

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on October 15, 2009 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

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Very nice - well said in just a few words. Are you always able to say so much in so few words? Maybe, too, it's because some of us can understand so easily what it is you're saying. As a writer, I think sometimes we are more sensitive - maybe more susceptible TO getting our hearts broke(?). Does this make any sense to you....very nice poem. Sad - nice:).                                                                     -Sincerely -INAHA (Diana Evans)

                                                                                                    

posted by Inaha on October 15, 2009 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

This is powerful! Wow! It says so much in so few words! BRAVO!!! sam

posted by sam444 on October 15, 2009 at 2:53 AM | link to this | reply

A very strong emotion there hardilaziz.

posted by shobana on October 15, 2009 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

 a broken heart evokes strong emotion

posted by OTA. on October 15, 2009 at 12:35 AM | link to this | reply

Sirf baat itne hai yeh khilona toot kar judta nahin! nice one!

posted by shamasehar on October 15, 2009 at 12:31 AM | link to this | reply

too many people in this world think it and everything and everyone in it

is just a big toy, very true, hardliaziz...and if something or someone or gets broken sweep up the pieces and by me new...wow, this one has quite the impact....

posted by Rumor on October 14, 2009 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

Heartfelt words. Thanks for your kind comment.

posted by snowview on October 14, 2009 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

this portrays real deep hurt.

posted by Kabu on October 13, 2009 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

Ouch

this one feels as if it is spoken from the depths of pain

posted by lionreign on October 13, 2009 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply