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How striking to see one half of the soul! Stunning, sweetie! I come to see how you are doing and then I find myself three days behind folks I like to read! What a mess but I am over it and attending to the details of putting it back together again! I think it has a chance to be better than before! Have a great day, Sweetie! Love you more than all the info that got lost to cyper space! lol sammie xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on October 15, 2009 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply

I love October mornings.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 13, 2009 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A great autumnal poem. Up here it feels more like winter - where is all that 'global warming' taking place?

posted by Nautikos on October 13, 2009 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Separation

" that mystical line where the sun , the stars and the moon go to hide"xoxox

posted by abanerjee on October 13, 2009 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

It certainly is crisp and breezy here.  It feels more like end of November weather than middle of October.  Beautiful rendering a an autumn poem you have here.

posted by TAPS. on October 13, 2009 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Gorgeous beyond words my friend

I love the almost wistful tone of this poem, it's gentle romance of the spirit is just enchanting. 

posted by lionreign on October 13, 2009 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

  Just before you can feel the breeze here if I open the door to my apartment for something. The horizon at sunset looks spectacular these days around here love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 12, 2009 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

yes I agree very beautiful and yes it is nearly winter here too.

posted by Kabu on October 12, 2009 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

 ~ you had me at the end line ~ soooo gorgeous and the last words just made my heart beat - beat - beat ~ aww  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 12, 2009 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

So beautiful, tranquil, divine. To me today felt much like winter too, I swear I could smell snow. Blessed Be.

posted by Nileangel on October 12, 2009 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

this is cool!

posted by 9STAR on October 12, 2009 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

A very beautiful poem as all you write is. Now please educate me if you don't mind, Why do you leave the 'o' out of God? What do I not understand?

posted by WileyJohn on October 12, 2009 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply