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This one I really like. It seems to be a conclusion to a long process anyone who has loved goes thru. So where are you going to go (or leap to) next?

posted by jfm32 on October 12, 2009 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

 you did it again with poignant words

posted by merkie on October 12, 2009 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

This poem makes me feel sad.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 11, 2009 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written, as always. Hope you're doing well. Nita.

posted by snowview on October 11, 2009 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

But how does that help that he knows that you cannot forget?

posted by Straightforward on October 11, 2009 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

 I’ve done this, love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 11, 2009 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

How very powerful and a secret which seems to be backed by strength..... 

posted by Troosha on October 11, 2009 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

 how utterly touching ~ the end ---- the pith of this whole poem ~  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 10, 2009 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

Wow. I've not thought about it much, but that is true. While the emotions fade, the memories don't always accompany them....perhaps we have the memories minus the emotions; and that's why they don't hurt to recall anymore...? (Thinking on keyboard, here. Very good to be this thought provoking, thank you...!)

posted by Darson on October 10, 2009 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

We have missed you but here you are back. Your poems are sometimes very mysterious. Enjoyed reading  .   Chuck

 

posted by chuck_ibrahim on October 10, 2009 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I'm not sure I could do that with one I had loved, but your poem is another story and beautiful, just as you usually make them.

posted by WileyJohn on October 10, 2009 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! Awesome poem.

God Bless!

posted by dougspoetry on October 10, 2009 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

I've been wondering where you were and hoping you were not ill.
There is surely truth in that poem, especially the last couple of lines.
Well done!

posted by TAPS. on October 10, 2009 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply