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So thought provoking and it seems that life is like that
posted by
merkie
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October 12, 2009
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Perplexingly profound imagery.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
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October 10, 2009
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Very nice, Sam, as usual
Furthermore, I think our whole life is a test or a "game"
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
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October 10, 2009
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Sam
"The journey, o’er before it’s begun,
a board game on life ~
and life events watched me flounder before the finish line ...
(no one wins, it’s best to end this game of strife)."
You summed up a heart's journey in 4 concise lines! it's true genius...
posted by
lindo
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October 10, 2009
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Great poem Sammie... very "nouvelle génération" . Loved the play of words and the images of different "cheating" ways As far as your questions... I am here sweetie... just having trouble sitting up loll... the Dr. does not let me spend too much time typing and work has to come first :-( but I do read a lot, specially those favorites of mine like you :-), even if I can't comment as often or as long as I would like too. Sometimes I leave calling cards but they are so impersonal other times I just don't.I have taken to writing my poems on a tape recorder...The indignity of it!!!! now if I could just get me one of those voice recognition thingies loll Be well darling and no worries... I will be back in full force very soon :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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October 10, 2009
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You describe reality so well!


posted by
hardilaziz
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October 10, 2009
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you did very well with it, too!
posted by
Ariala
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October 10, 2009
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Sad the way we play games with each other! Perhaps playing 'Old maids' is the most peaceful and least harmful game of all.

Your computer seems to be OK now, isn't it? Best wishes for a peaceful day.
posted by
elinjo
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October 9, 2009
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Goodmessing again dear one, My Sam Iam.
posted by
Kabu
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October 9, 2009
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Excellent analogy and yes, imagery pow!!! This I like ~ Your poetry is so vivid with imagery Shelly ~ I like how you 'play' with it. Deal another hand ~

~ Love ya' ~ Elyse xooxox
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elysianfields
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October 9, 2009
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