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When you find the mold let me know, love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
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October 11, 2009
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I like it! Requires deep contemplation.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
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October 10, 2009
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This poem is just pregnant with thought. I wanted to read the verses more than once.
posted by
Darson
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October 9, 2009
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Even before I had finished reading the poem, about three-fourths, I had decided to read it again! Then when I reached the bottom I was so humbled to learn I had inspired this! Thank you, I love being associated with this piece! On my first read I was was savoring imagery and found myself involved deeply due to cadence! I love poems that question, specifically regarding the conflict and then the opening for the resolution in the eyes of the reader, ergo even to the point of it being lesson for a future reference! The imagery builds so nicely on its own! I didn't pick that up until the second read! Well done, indeed! So powerful in word usage and the placement is awesome! sam
posted by
sam444
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October 9, 2009
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