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Excellent, Sam!
posted by
hardilaziz
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October 8, 2009
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ahhhh... 33, my favorite and most frequently encountered number. You've done well with this one, speaking of going places... I love the refrain.
posted by
myrrhage_
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October 8, 2009
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Re: I'm with you, sam....GO TIGERS!!!
well, bring on the Red Wings! Its hockey season, barely...
(did someone say "bring on the Lions? Shhhh, you'll scare them. Last time they won a championship I was 10 or 11..
..)
posted by
Rumor
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October 7, 2009
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"Tosh-Expression 33", interesting. Deep and heavy realization, wow. How are those winning "UnderTigers",
I hope they've been Over Achievers.
Go TIGERS!
posted by
yellowrose55
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October 7, 2009
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Awesome! I loved the close & good luck to your team.
posted by
shamasehar
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October 7, 2009
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I do love this poem
It is beautifully written and shows both your superb technique and your immense talent
posted by
lionreign
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October 7, 2009
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what an honest view of reliving the past
you have put together a very complicated situation into a very simple enlightning view. Very talented and very well crafted. Everybody can say that is me :)
posted by
Tzippy
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October 6, 2009
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"
I am the phantom of my/mind’s dream"- really nice phrase(ing)
posted by
NighthawkNY
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October 6, 2009
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"I am the phantom of my minds dream" Wow, really nice write. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
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October 6, 2009
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Shelly
Since the Jays are out of it (and have been for a looooong time), I shall root for your Tigers...
posted by
Nautikos
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October 6, 2009
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Go Tigers!
posted by
Darson
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October 6, 2009
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Sam, I have no idea at all about the game apart from what I read here..sorry but if Tigers is your team then GO TIGERS! I'm with you!! Lovely poety sweetie.
posted by
shobana
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October 6, 2009
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I am with you Shelly ~ Go Tigers --- (however understand I am not a sports fan
) --- I will just be your cheerleader - LOL, and I love this poem and I think you can't work perfect to perfect ---
~ xoxox
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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October 6, 2009
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Good Luck! 
posted by
magic_moon
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October 6, 2009
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I'm with you, sam....GO TIGERS!!!
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...
posted by
Rumor
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October 6, 2009
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New Comment on The Moment
Hi samm, Know something? IMO the mind's gremlins are superbly adept at feigning their own absence; until the "right" moment.
joab
posted by
joab3
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October 6, 2009
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I like your invention.
posted by
TAPS.
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October 6, 2009
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