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sounds good to me

posted by lustorlove on October 5, 2009 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Just stopping by dear friend!! 

posted by Samantha39 on October 4, 2009 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

yes sometimes that is asgoodas it should be.I think this is wonderful

so time to move on luv.

posted by Kabu on October 4, 2009 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

Can't see what's wrong with it sweetie..It's a great poem to me.

posted by shobana on October 4, 2009 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

Comment on A 'Golden Fleece'

Hi samm...understandable the impulse; like the sculptor who couldn't resist just "one more tap" at that small defect on the statue's nose . . . so he placed his chisel and tapped . . . you know the rest of the story.  joab

posted by joab3 on October 4, 2009 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

That's understandable; writing can do that to a person....

posted by Darson on October 4, 2009 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

Very interesting! I love poetry that echoes of our antiquity...

posted by Nautikos on October 4, 2009 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

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Sam

Did you realize you had the number one ranked blog today?  Congratulations!

posted by numberonemcfan on October 4, 2009 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

What a great lesson in acceptance, sometimes hard but when learned you are wise indeed. Blessed Be.

posted by Nileangel on October 4, 2009 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

"Happy the man who, like Ulysses, has made a fine voyage, or has won the Golden Fleece, and then returns, experienced and knowledgeable, to spend the rest of his life among his family. ~ Joachim Du Bellay

posted by TAPS. on October 4, 2009 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely and well done!

posted by Ariala on October 4, 2009 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Quite the challenge to make reality of heroic myths ..... Wonderful concept!!

posted by mariss9 on October 4, 2009 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

I love this poem...but don't go bonkers with it...I think it so awesome Shelly that you re-work your poetry - You're such a fine example of a writer.  This poem is so rich and leaves one to imagine with you ~ revives feelings of 'hope' and overcoming and determination and...much to this reader.  Have a great Sunday ~ and Write on!!! Love, Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 4, 2009 at 7:11 AM | link to this | reply