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I reeeally like this poem. And happy anniversary :)
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ruby14
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October 6, 2009
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I Just Realized Today
Awareness of one's self is critical.
Acceptance is slightly more challenging. Or so I've been told. Good stuff, samm/
joab
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October 4, 2009
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Many happy returns of the day!
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elinjo
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October 4, 2009
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Happy anniversary Sam
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Aspire2Inspire
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October 4, 2009
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Congrats and Happy Anniversary!
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Ariala
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October 4, 2009
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HAPPY ANNIVERSARY SWEETIE...you are quite the role model here after 2 years I must say..loved the poem too and have a great great time forever more in Blogit!! you deserve it.
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shobana
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October 4, 2009
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Oh, Happy Anniversary, sam.
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abanerjee
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October 3, 2009
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...happy anniversary!!!! moon
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magic_moon
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October 3, 2009
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Happy 2 blogit years!
Celebrate! Powerful poem..brutal honesty? The ending
is mind boggling.
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yellowrose55
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October 3, 2009
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Or do you live truth for admitting a lie? Nice read my friend. Blessed Be.
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Nileangel
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October 3, 2009
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But, it spreads beautifully in the madness of words love. BC-A, Top of the Stairs
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BC-A
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October 3, 2009
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I just realized it now too! Did you change the title of this post? Happy Anniversary!
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myrrhage_
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October 3, 2009
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Congratulations on 2 year Anniversary Shelly ~
~ and This poem --- astounding, you've really brought indellible passion to your poetry by this type of dialogue ~ I love this writing of yours. I like the flavors - the mix of emotions...to the powerful end! Succinct ~
xoxox Elyse
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elysianfields
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October 3, 2009
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You've been here only 2 years? I thought, seeing how well you are integrated to all our lives, that you had been in blogit for much longer...Happy anniversary, MEDEAR!
I hope you're here for many more years! And of course, interesting poem, today! I must confess that I really like reading what the others have to say about it too! It some times help me understand it better or with a new light! And, nop, no Freeman lately.
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auslander
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October 3, 2009
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It is all about I, isn't it Sam
What a gem you've shared here!
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hardilaziz
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October 3, 2009
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Shelly
Happy Anniversary! And this, like so many other of your poems, is extremely thought-provoking...
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Nautikos
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October 3, 2009
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This is good.
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Darson
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October 3, 2009
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Fantastic!
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calia14
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October 3, 2009
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You wrote the perfect poem for my landlady who’s the real Mrs. Sun of a different nationality. She really did fall yesterday. She fell down the marble steps of the back porch entrance to the kitchen. It’s the indoor location that I use for my stories love. A black and blue mark runs down her side. I guess that we can remember her in our prayers. Take care. Lol. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
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BC-A
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October 3, 2009
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Deep and wise, Shelly. These are the thoughts that can keep one awake night after night, so hard to greet the day exhausted from peering into the mirror.
Very powerful indeed.
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myrrhage_
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October 3, 2009
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Wow, Sam444 -that was powerful.
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adnohr
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October 3, 2009
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It'swonderfultoread someone who has come to terms with themselves
and loves themself. We can't love others until wecan do that. My Sam I am you deserve to be number one.
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Kabu
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October 3, 2009
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Shelly, this is amazing; congratulations! Thanks very much for your note on my post. I too am not fond of food! I think it could happen when we live alone, and even cooking seems a chore when there's so much else to be done (like writing!) I hope you're looking after yourself and enjoying the weekend! Blessings. Nita.
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snowview
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October 3, 2009
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The lines do merge at times it seems Well said Shelly!
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merkie
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October 3, 2009
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sometimes its easier to live a lie
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lustorlove
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October 3, 2009
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I agree
with everyone... It's simply captivating and kudos for such a beautiful piece!
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
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October 3, 2009
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this poem is brutally honest
when someone can face themselves and express it so beautifully in a poem, the world listens.
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Tzippy
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October 3, 2009
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This poem ruminates with truth.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
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October 3, 2009
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Oh, sam
This is simply fantastic poetry. Amazing, to say the least! Very captivating, beautifully stylized and speaks directly to the heart ... so universal. Do accept my heartiest congratulations at so fine an entry
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abanerjee
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October 3, 2009
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Wow, that is an incredible poem! Your talent shines from line to line...a
true work of genius and an honest account of our human condition. If it wasn't for Christ, none could or would be redeemed! Be encouraged. Our salvation is in Christ, not in ourselves...Woo, isn't that wonderful?
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Ariala
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October 3, 2009
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