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I do the same- get out of harm's way!

posted by hardilaziz on October 3, 2009 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Well put, Shelly.  I'd hate to be the one to have scorned you, but I'd love to have your resolve. :)

posted by myrrhage_ on October 3, 2009 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply

Focus on the lies of love being true in our relationships . I like your emphsis on choice and truth seen in the eyes of yourself.Nuggets of wisdom Shelly/sam

posted by merkie on October 3, 2009 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely Sam  I love the three of them.   Chuck

posted by chuck_ibrahim on October 3, 2009 at 2:42 AM | link to this | reply

 This one evoked various emotions.

posted by TAPS. on October 2, 2009 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

That one really made me feel. Thank you.

posted by Darson on October 2, 2009 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Shelly, this one had me looking 'all 'round.  This is full of great imagery, but, moreso stunning proclamation.  Moved me to the marrow ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 2, 2009 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

you truly know how to write and touch the soul

posted by Kabu on October 2, 2009 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

You know, I thing you should find someone to make some of your poem into theater plays. It would be fantastic. Just too bad that the North American culture is not as infatuated with poetry as the Scandinavian culture.

 

You would be a Goddess there! I finally made my own pic!

posted by auslander on October 2, 2009 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

 You work the deceit and consequential melancholy through it. It makes the reader mad too. Good for you sweetheart. lol. BC-A,  Bill’s RLLst

 

posted by BC-A on October 2, 2009 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply