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lovely verse
superbly written
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lionreign
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October 2, 2009
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Dear Shelly ~ I love this form: Pantoun and you know how to "toun" so well ~ This has such great rhythm - and the subject is so dear...farewell ode. Touching ~ xoxo
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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October 2, 2009
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sam ~.~
Lovely and touching write about lost love to which, I'm sure, many can relate- I know I can. One line, in particular stood out for me -- "...What was once hidden deep inside has become a pleasant finality." Stunning piece. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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October 2, 2009
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Beautiful and poignant as usual Shelly! Thanks very much for the interesting note on my post! Enjoy October!
posted by
snowview
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October 2, 2009
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posted by
9STAR
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October 1, 2009
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Intense and brimming with love. Great, Sam!
posted by
hardilaziz
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October 1, 2009
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Real feeling in that one, MEDEAR. It must be autumn... Thanks for the comment. He did come back by bus tonight!
posted by
auslander
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October 1, 2009
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sam
It puts mystique in the horizon love. BC-A, BILL’S RJJst
posted by
BC-A
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October 1, 2009
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How nostalgic my darling Sam..a trip down memory lane. A beautifully written poem sweetie . I love the repeat in having to dream. have a lovely evening.
posted by
shobana
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October 1, 2009
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how sweet and romantic
posted by
lustorlove
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October 1, 2009
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sam,before I met Liz, I had a "summer sweetheart", Holly...I think I've
mentioned her in some of my summer reminiscing...we "grew up" together....she has a special spot in my memories and always will..
...
posted by
Rumor
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October 1, 2009
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