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This rework was a treat to read! Well worth the retooling! Your flow and rhyme scheme made almost perfect transitions throughout!
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Ryan_Morrow
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September 30, 2009
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great work
for me what touched me the most is too old to do anything about it and and than you said too young to do anything about it, WOW
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Tzippy
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September 30, 2009
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...this is VERY good and set me to examining myself (again) moon
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magic_moon
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September 30, 2009
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sam This is a most Superlative poem. And it captures much of my own attitude. For me, especially,
carpe diem has strong meaning.
joab
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joab3
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September 30, 2009
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insightful and instructive
And so very human, let others seize the day, I am too old or young or tired... brilliant
posted by
lionreign
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September 30, 2009
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When we leave things to other people we show we trust them too.
posted by
elinjo
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September 30, 2009
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Very perceptive Shelly! I like the idea of carpe diem, but as you rightly say, there's a time and age for everything! Thanks for your generous note on my post. Being a full fledged article, it's a bit long, sorry! I will post one on sources of antioxidants too, maybe after editing/shortening a bit! Hope you're doing well. Love and blessings. Nita.
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snowview
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September 30, 2009
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Very profound work!
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hardilaziz
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September 29, 2009
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What a creative poem and yes, let others have it... I just can't do it anylonger...rush is not for me, I work best when I work - slow and methodically; in order to keep organized. Great read. ~
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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September 29, 2009
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that's just how I feel when Monday morning they all rush off to work
and I am retired.
posted by
Kabu
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September 29, 2009
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Yes, let others have it when they can and I can't. Too old, too young it all works for me at times. Great thought for real life.
posted by
mariss9
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September 29, 2009
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Yes, let others seize it.
Well today at least.
posted by
Azur
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September 29, 2009
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What a great one for me at my time in life. I'm afraid that so often this is me now when it once was not so, and should not be even now:
"Age works so handily for me, an escape
from my chosen reality, an escape that pleases me."
posted by
TAPS.
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September 29, 2009
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I love the use of hard words. sometimes you force me to use the dictionary. I am sure you have a very good vocabulary
Chuck
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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September 29, 2009
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My Sam - ok there are some words I have to look up but I kinda got the jist of it..lol. as usual remarkable sweetie.
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shobana
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September 29, 2009
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cool
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Samantha39
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September 29, 2009
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Pell-Mell
I think I woudn't choose a path of frozen time because it seemes to me Cold and lifeless on the other side Burr! Hard to choose one destiny when youre not in controll. I like your story poem. Lv Femia
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fememefeme
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September 29, 2009
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