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posted by
lustorlove
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September 29, 2009
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Time to awaken. Well done Shelly/sam!
posted by
merkie
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September 29, 2009
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Hope all is well with you!
The poem is intriguing and I find myself reading and re-reading it. Very nicely done
posted by
lionreign
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September 29, 2009
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great insight into life in the darkness
beautiful poem
posted by
Tzippy
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September 29, 2009
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Wow!
that was simply great! Kudos! The title alone was so intriguing, yet alone reading the whole thing...
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
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September 29, 2009
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It is really a fabulous poetry. I totally agree with Shobana
Chuck
posted by
chuck_ibrahim
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September 29, 2009
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Why can't we just give ourselves more time to be? Here's wishing you the best for a relaxed and peaceful day and freedom from migraine.
posted by
elinjo
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September 29, 2009
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sam
This is simply amazing, and as always, excellent, superb! "To be"
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posted by
abanerjee
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September 28, 2009
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Stern warning this to the waylaid. Bravo, Sam!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 28, 2009
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Wow!
posted by
adnohr
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September 28, 2009
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My Sam - Brilliant poetry..the dreams of a misguided man to realization "to be". Hope you are well sweetie. have a lovely evening.
posted by
shobana
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September 28, 2009
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It's time to be! Indeed. 
posted by
Nileangel
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September 28, 2009
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the sojourner found himself inattentive " - very cool word choice... always great 
posted by
NighthawkNY
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September 28, 2009
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We're doing great Shelly thanks for asking!
I have been really busy with school, but am starting to focus on my poetry!
Write again soon!
Love Anna
posted by
ANROHA25
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September 28, 2009
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Shelly, this in fact reminds me of Moody Blues ~ what an awesome poem ~ brilliant!
xoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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September 28, 2009
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sam444
You know I’ve been influenced by the lyrics of Dylan. And, I see his type of abstract word play in yours love. But, you seem to delve into 40s surrealism , 19th century British romanticism, and philosophical thought as well. All in all I think they come together to make one hell of a poem here. Take care. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst 
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BC-A
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September 28, 2009
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