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Deep!!! connecting the dots! The tie that binds us all together is invisible but endless and strong!I love your poems Marta!

posted by merkie on September 29, 2009 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

and why do so many men think it shameful to cry? It took me a long time

to break out of this mode of thinking (it was strictly my upbringing) and let the tears flow when necessary....

posted by Rumor on September 29, 2009 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic!

Your work is so vivid, so precise in it's expression that I lose myself in it's gentle rhythms and emotions.  Brilliant!

posted by lionreign on September 29, 2009 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

Very true...many, and some of the best things, are unseen!

posted by snowview on September 29, 2009 at 4:15 AM | link to this | reply

It feels like a lyric poem but then I think ballad with a the voice of a dramatic monologue! Either way it is awesome, poignant and cuts to the soul! Excellent! And for your mostest, again, I leave you with Mercury! sammie xoxoxo O, perhaps, Pluto!

posted by sam444 on September 28, 2009 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

How lovely..it touches the soul Sinome.(the emoticons are not working again sweetie but a precious rose for you)

posted by shobana on September 28, 2009 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

BEAUTIFUL

posted by Nileangel on September 28, 2009 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

'...to ignore the tears
that make your eyes shine,
in the mistaken belief that men don't cry,'

You not only write beautifully, you are so full  of knowledge of humanity I am always astounded at the depth of you and what you understand about emotions.

posted by WileyJohn on September 28, 2009 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Understanding whenever it comes changes the soul, it grows, it is saddened or gladdened but it is changed forever. Lovely as is usual. God bless you dear one. You have made xoxoxox a staple on here.

posted by Justi on September 28, 2009 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

So do I Formerstudentintern ... I prefer immediate understanding but alas its not always possible  loll

posted by Sinome on September 28, 2009 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

I much prefer immediate understanding.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 28, 2009 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

oh dear!

posted by 9STAR on September 28, 2009 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

this is as a song ~ a touching song with a loving melody ~ touches my heart xoxo Elyse

posted by elysianfields on September 28, 2009 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

very touching

posted by Samantha39 on September 28, 2009 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

What a poem.  Makes me have goose bumps. 

posted by TAPS. on September 28, 2009 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply