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Absolutely beautiful sam! Been there-felt it-but could never have written

about it as you have! God bless. Chris.

posted by Scramble on September 27, 2009 at 2:08 PM | link to this | reply

there you are the romantic poet.

posted by lustorlove on September 27, 2009 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Such a wistful but beautiful poem Shelly.  

posted by elinjo on September 27, 2009 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, that poem really applies to what I'm feeling right now, I'm frustrated with a certain someone and if I recite this poem to her it'll say everything. It's like you're reading my mind Sam 

posted by Aspire2Inspire on September 27, 2009 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Alright - I have rediscovered you, Sam444. I was only paying attention to your funny videos, had completely forgotten about this Blog. Now you're in my favorites, so THAT won't be happening again!! This was a heart-wrenching read, as was your previous post about your house and son. You're a stand-up lady, Sam, to stay so cheerful and encouraging to others while enduring so much yourself. There is a poem by Margaret Bailey - it brings you to mind. Am sending it to you by e-mail.

posted by adnohr on September 27, 2009 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

posted by magic_moon on September 26, 2009 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

Missing your love

How much of the romance is part of the missing it. I look forward to having it again. Love is a powerful sentiment and you cought the heart of the missing.

posted by Tzippy on September 26, 2009 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Delightful stuff, Sam!

posted by hardilaziz on September 26, 2009 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

ahhhh, I love parallels.  Was just writing something similar.

posted by myrrhage_ on September 26, 2009 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

Imploringly passionate.

God Bless!

posted by dougspoetry on September 26, 2009 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

so boooooooooootiful, you did as always!

posted by 9STAR on September 26, 2009 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

Nice work, Shelly!

posted by _teddypoet_ on September 26, 2009 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sweet and lon ging Sammie... loved it xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 26, 2009 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Merkie, the lost love is a always a nice place to visit  Thank you for sharing. Chuck

posted by chuck_ibrahim on September 26, 2009 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

sometimes the lost love is a good place to visit. Helps fill some lonesome moments

posted by merkie on September 26, 2009 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

Just so beautiful..who can not hear and listen to the plea..I'm with you sweetie. My daughter and I were chatting and so I am up at this unearthly hour and I really have to make it for the morning mass so I think I better have a sleep in for a bit...lol. have a lovely day my sweet Sam.

posted by shobana on September 26, 2009 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply