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Very nice indeed!

posted by snowview on September 26, 2009 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

posted by _teddypoet_ on September 25, 2009 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

thats a long time

posted by lustorlove on September 25, 2009 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful and so settling!

posted by Ariala on September 25, 2009 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

I find this to be incredibly romantic.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 25, 2009 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

So very hopeful of achieving 'love'. Did you consider that it might be a process of growing to love rather than falling in love!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on September 25, 2009 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

The night means so many things to so many people.
I just came from reading Ryan_Morrow's poem about night patrol in the desert.
I love the night, but in some places in our city night brings gunshots and sirens.
Your poem here brings out the best of the night.

posted by TAPS. on September 25, 2009 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

This one is special

I am totally blown away by it - utterly fabulous in both form and content, well done, my dear!

posted by lionreign on September 25, 2009 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome, this is a very romantic poem  Keep on the good work    Chuck

posted by chuck_ibrahim on September 25, 2009 at 3:58 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully described Sinome

that feeling of forever in safety and warmth that is love; lovely write my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on September 25, 2009 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful words of love Sinome. Just lovely.

posted by shobana on September 25, 2009 at 12:04 AM | link to this | reply

so nicely put it together...

posted by 9STAR on September 24, 2009 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

J Who would want more love? To illustrate passionate love poets have chosen the stars for their imagery since the first night that people loved. Your poem touched me. BC-A, Bill’s RoostJ

 

posted by BC-A on September 24, 2009 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Silence, know him better in darkness, will love him till the stars burn away, to eternity. Sentimental, philosophic, extremely sweet, a fabulous expression with an appeal of the immediate xoxo.

posted by abanerjee on September 24, 2009 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

This was very well executed, Sinome! "till the stars all burn away" sealed the deal for me!

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 24, 2009 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful...

posted by NighthawkNY on September 24, 2009 at 8:27 PM | link to this | reply