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Re: Beautiful work Nighthawk,
so it does indeed! i will enjoy reading more of your work over time...thanks for sharing-

posted by NighthawkNY on September 25, 2009 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on September 25, 2009 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work Nighthawk,
Amazing, this, "stars have not yet fallen/and ancient trees sing for their amber"

 

 I feel lucky to have found serendipity.  Here's mine, from not so long ago:

 

Fourth Coming

trinity is spent
it traces its orbits
stretching infinity
to outer lands unseen
so why do we cower when the shadow probes
its fingers to Hearts chambering echoes
scratching new life as the chalice empties
dusts resurrecting:
and a new moon hatches
eternal

 

We are of a kind it seems.

posted by myrrhage_ on September 25, 2009 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

JA lot of love happens in eyes, eh? BC-A, Bill’s RoostJ

posted by BC-A on September 24, 2009 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

A stunning poem Nighthawk. Welcome back and thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.

posted by shobana on September 24, 2009 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Some gorgeous images that come to life beside the reader!

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 24, 2009 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply