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Another gem! And, yes, the climax is well-executed here!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 25, 2009 at 10:21 PM
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This analogy is also found in the yogic literature. The 'dross' must be burned away they say. In the context of this world, this means that seekers must suffer in order to cleanse. Then they can share the light. True seekers have God's guidance and do not need suffering to cleanse or emit light. Evil wishes to kill seekers then tell survivors that they were only 'cleansing'. A soul will always be a soul and not need evil. Evil will have their karmic retribution!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 25, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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merkie, this one is beautiful and I love the way you bring it to a very
fitting climax...
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posted by
Rumor
on September 25, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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I love the concept of this piece
It is so apt to your central message. The execution, of course, shows all you usual skill - great write, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on September 25, 2009 at 5:22 AM
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Margaret this is superb
excellent piece of work; loved the way it just flows so naturally; we are all uncut diamonds waiting to be polished! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on September 25, 2009 at 2:01 AM
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nice!
posted by
NighthawkNY
on September 24, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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JAah natural rhythm comes from God, love. BC-A, Bill’s RoostJ
posted by
BC-A
on September 24, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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Just beautiful Merkie and so profound..
posted by
shobana
on September 24, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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Beautiful
I love it
Thank you for sharing this nice poem Chuck!
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 24, 2009 at 5:03 PM
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Good stuff, Merkie!
posted by
Raphael222
on September 24, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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