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I guess I wait my fellow traveler

posted by lustorlove on September 25, 2009 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

It seems that I read this one before.  I may be wrong, but something about it made an impression on me.  I enjoyed reading it again. 

posted by TAPS. on September 25, 2009 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

Your words have the strength to dispel darkness!

posted by shamasehar on September 25, 2009 at 2:55 AM | link to this | reply

WOW
Shelly my dear you have excelled even yourself with this awesome write! Excellent my friend; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on September 25, 2009 at 1:51 AM | link to this | reply

How to make the right choice?... Problem of plenty?... Great riddle!

posted by hardilaziz on September 24, 2009 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

JThe heart goes on automatic, love. BC-A, Bill’s RoostJ

posted by BC-A on September 24, 2009 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

Bbeautifully sad Sammie... You just get better and better :-)  Love you much  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 24, 2009 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

good to be reading your fine work again!

posted by NighthawkNY on September 24, 2009 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

My Sam - Loneliness is an awful feeling to have and to go with a saddened heart is so crushing. Such a melancholic poem. Some saddened hearts lift and live by the poems they write and loneliness becomes a thing of the past. Have a lovely weekend my Sam.

posted by shobana on September 24, 2009 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

I was expecting some music to go with it! I think that you should start singing (or have someone do it) them with music and put them on yutube or something! This one would go so well with some blues.

posted by auslander on September 24, 2009 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Samantha39 on September 24, 2009 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

Very sad for the lonely heart  But there is so much truth to it. Very nice poem Sam. Thank you for sharing  Chuck!

posted by chuck_ibrahim on September 24, 2009 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

Classically and well said...Cheers!!

posted by mariss9 on September 24, 2009 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice Shelly! Will mail you soon! Nita.

posted by snowview on September 24, 2009 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

Light
Nice write Sam444 I always enjoy your story poems. Jesus the light of the world!Lv. FEmia

posted by fememefeme on September 24, 2009 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

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