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Amazing! Classic!! Phenomenal!!! Lying in wait throwing in the line, the hunter, probably a fisherman, maybe not ... makes me ponder, reflect, mediatate. All I can say is S U P E R B!
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abanerjee
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September 24, 2009
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A very clever poeem with lines snapping with meanings . Well done Sam!
posted by
merkie
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September 24, 2009
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Great poem
I love the way you take something simple to demonstrate something more profound - great metaphor
posted by
lionreign
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September 24, 2009
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Great work Shelly
superb imagery as always; many blessings and thanks always
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mariaki
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September 24, 2009
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cool...the fisherman can always go back to his car and eat a sandwich.
posted by
MINDFUCK
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September 24, 2009
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My sympathies are always with the underdog. Exceptional use of imagery, Sam!
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 23, 2009
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Sam - lovely work as usual..like the part where the hunter reduces the prized stag to a simple prey..
Have a lovely nite.
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shobana
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September 23, 2009
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Excellent work Sammie!!!! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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September 23, 2009
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sam ~.~
The last stanza can also apply to ... life. Fantastic write! Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
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September 23, 2009
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Oh, this poem goes so well with the fall days approaching...
posted by
auslander
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September 23, 2009
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I always wanted to learn the art of 'fly fishing' ~ closest I got was to bass fishing. I like the whole array of scenery, the placid feelings that I feel while reading...and even the excitement. This is stunning, evocative ~ Superb, Shelly.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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September 23, 2009
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Poignant and rich with imagination while utilizing the small things in life! Always a pleasure!
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Ryan_Morrow
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September 23, 2009
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