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posted by johnmacnab on September 23, 2009 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

Pat
Beautiful, Pat.  I've been on the same elevator but I'm sure it sank further than the basement.

posted by johnmacnab on September 23, 2009 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

HAHAHA.  Yes.  I see a specific face, hard body, golden tousled hair, from out of the past, and I can still feel those same feelings.

posted by TAPS. on September 22, 2009 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Pat
This is simply very, very good! There's a whole phase of someone's life imbeddded in this scene, much daydreaming and maybe even sighs and sleepless nights...

posted by Nautikos on September 22, 2009 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

Hm yes, been there too! I loved the last lines that expressed the sinking feeling.

posted by elinjo on September 22, 2009 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

I love this!

posted by bitchbrew9 on September 22, 2009 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

I think we've all been there. You've got the feeling down pat in this poem, Pat-B, LOL.

posted by adnohr on September 22, 2009 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem!
'To loosen the fools tongue.' It's almost medieval....

posted by Antipodean on September 22, 2009 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply