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"Never again." Such sad words.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 22, 2009 at 4:31 PM | link to this | reply

Sadness will stay...happiness comes and goes!

posted by hardilaziz on September 22, 2009 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome, very heartfelt and touching...anyone who can't feel your poetry

must be half dead already.....

posted by Rumor on September 21, 2009 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

The times pass and more to come...a walk in the valley of wonder this was!

posted by Ryan_Morrow on September 21, 2009 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

Remember the good times and be thankful for the time that you had.  Some never know love.    Beautiful writing.

posted by TAPS. on September 21, 2009 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome - I truly hope the sadness will go away..A beautiful poignant poem.

posted by shobana on September 21, 2009 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Flows so beautifully, as always! Thanks very much indeed for your warm comment on my (September) post--really thoughtful of you to remember my son Ashish. I will be going on the 24th to visit him---do continue to keep him in your prayers. Love and blessings. Nita.

posted by snowview on September 21, 2009 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

how sad as the leaves begin to fall

posted by lustorlove on September 21, 2009 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Oh...this touches

as always your poetry just touches a heart, a soul.  I am reminded of the tune, Autumn Leaves (one of my favorites) and the whole imagery coming forth is such a reminder ~ melancholy and dear - ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on September 21, 2009 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Bleak

and makes one look forward to spring!

posted by malcolm on September 21, 2009 at 5:44 AM | link to this | reply

This is very awesome imagery! I enjoyed the cadence as it took me through such expressive imagery! sammie xoxoxo

posted by sam444 on September 21, 2009 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome ~.~

A deeply moving piece that squeezes a tear from the heart...so beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on September 21, 2009 at 1:39 AM | link to this | reply

sad ...but very pretty......

posted by 9STAR on September 20, 2009 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply