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Keep your dreams alive together or apart. i definatly relate, having been through what would seem to be a similar situation.Thank you for your compliments on my writings, they are greatly appreciated. I am only just now figuring out how this all works and having the time to post back.
Scot
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MINDFUCK
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September 22, 2009
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Keep it alive- fantasy I mean. Love the images it creates.
posted by
hardilaziz
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September 21, 2009
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Well done!
I like the 'in the cold light of day' spirit of the poem. It's a deceptively brave sentiment...
posted by
Antipodean
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September 21, 2009
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"A new adventure amid chance must not be delayed".............I loved it.Thanks for your visits & kind comments always.You are always there to encourage.
posted by
shamasehar
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September 21, 2009
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Very touching poem sam.
posted by
muley12
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September 21, 2009
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Flows beautifully, it's a heartbreaker! Love..how can it be measured?
posted by
yellowrose55
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September 20, 2009
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Stunningly romantic Sam, great work.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
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September 20, 2009
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Awesome poetry and so moving, rhythmic, soulful
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posted by
abanerjee
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September 20, 2009
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Hi Shelly!
I am back and I missed you!
Beautiful poem!
Love ANROHA25
posted by
ANROHA25
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September 20, 2009
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you take us there with you
posted by
Samantha39
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September 20, 2009
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I know these feelings
posted by
lustorlove
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September 20, 2009
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My Sam - hi..there is no sense of measure taking down the dream..such lovely poetry, so soulful. I loved it.
posted by
shobana
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September 20, 2009
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Do you write these poems from scratch everyday? I'm impressed!
posted by
numberonemcfan
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September 20, 2009
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Dear Shelly, I got the beat with this measure. I will read again and savor each time. This is loverly and I see pantoum and villanelle and well, lots of rhyme and rhythm. Very good read and full of movement.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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September 20, 2009
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No sense of measure
Sam444 I have a tape measure and it's 25feet long it doesn't measure up to the wonderful poem you wrote by a mile. Lv. FEmia
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fememefeme
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September 20, 2009
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September 20, 2009
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