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posted by mneme on November 4, 2009 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

You describe heartbreak very thoroughly:  ...Yet beneath this place of thoughts reeling and sleepless nights of anger fueling and remorse simmering...

posted by TAPS. on September 18, 2009 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

Robust message, good work.

God Bless!

posted by dougspoetry on September 18, 2009 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Very powerful. Hope your daughter sees it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 18, 2009 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

Very Impressive!

Has your daughter seen it?

posted by Antipodean on September 18, 2009 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

BEAUTIFUL

posted by Nileangel on September 18, 2009 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha, this poem is absolutely astounding, one of your best.  You and your daughter are so lucky to have each other.

posted by myrrhage_ on September 18, 2009 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha - A very touching poem. I'm sure she is strengthened too by your support for her at this time of her need. I hope too the healing hands of God eases her pain and yours too.

posted by shobana on September 18, 2009 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

very touching and soothing, both, in what it so gently tells us...

......let those healing hands of God hold you and your daughter at this time....

posted by Rumor on September 18, 2009 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

An Amazing poem Troosha..

We all feel weak at some time and this poem speaks to all women who experienced the pain of a broken heart. I wish yo both all the best.

posted by lindo on September 18, 2009 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Extraordinarily sensitive write!

posted by hardilaziz on September 18, 2009 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

very nice poem, sorry to hear about your daughter, we cant help feel their pain

posted by lustorlove on September 18, 2009 at 8:22 AM | link to this | reply

While, in one way, sympathizing with your daughter, what a wonderful mom you have been to her, and all of us here are sure that it'll help her find strength and solace, both. She'll be proud of you, Troosha.

posted by abanerjee on September 18, 2009 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

This is a powerful gift of love from you to your daughter. A profound uplift to all women to claim their inner strength.

posted by merkie on September 18, 2009 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

any day, any moment,..you are such a wonderful person..

posted by 9STAR on September 18, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

Touching and soothing...

posted by Ariala on September 18, 2009 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply